by B4BY BLU3 X Dec 13, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Another teardrop |
That was a good poem though it was not very long |
by Luke
that was a good poem. but one thing... rhyme ISNT essential in a poem. you dont have to force it where it doesnt belong. you did a good job tho, im just givin that advice in general. |