that was a good poem. but one thing... rhyme ISNT essential in a poem. you dont have to force it where it doesnt belong. you did a good job tho, im just givin that advice in general.

That was a good poem though it was not very long
And I know it must be annoying when people say this, but i just thought i'd tell you to read over it as there are a few typos
good work
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