excellent job. one but of criticism, try making it longer. other then that i loved the emotions you display and the form was wonderful. good show ^^;

thanks,
Dominic

Awwwww... this poem was Awesome! I liked the open-ness that you opened your heart to the girl:) ~5/5~ Keep it up!

~!~Love Sedusha~!~

hey, Dom! its leopup again! ;-) just checkin out more of ur poems... returning the favor :-D good job i liked this 1 it sounds like u really like her! keep writing!~LeoPup198

very cute and thoughtful...great job.loves.

I REALYY LIKED UR POEM I HOPE ONE SUM GUY COULD WRITE ONE FOR ME LIKE THAT :) ITS REALLY GOOD I GIVE U 5!!!!!!!! CHECK OUT MY POEMS!!!! OK ~1~ LATERZ

Love it... muy excelente y muy interestante....