Overlooked

by miss tanner   Dec 13, 2004


All the time i spent with him
thinking i had it made
you tried to show me i was wrong
and getting played
all the times i cried
thinking i was alone
you tried to show me a brighter side
not every man was so cold
all the time i thought
i was doing so good
you tried to show me i could do better
i only misunderstood
all the time i wasted looking
for a good man
you tried to show me you were him
the one who understands
all the time i spent
wishing for love so true
you tried to show me you could love me
there was no limit to What you would do
all the time i spent looking
for a man with no lies
u tried to show me u were there
overlooked by my 20/20 eyes
you were overlooked
by my mind and my heart
now i realize how i have
loved you from the start

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful, touching and heartfelt. Great poem. Enjoyed! lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Fluffy Cotton

    your poem was wonderful. try to work on consistancy in syllables. other then that it was great form and wonderful use of words. excellent job C: