Your poem has a nice structure and the feeling is deep, while the shortness helps to understand it, it would probably be better if it were longer. other then that, wonderful ^-^

You shouldn't think that way girl! Be Strong! Don't kill yourself cuz of people annoying or some sh*! like that!!! Hold Yourself..

*!*Sedusha*!*

i agree dont kill your self over that your way better then that and you know it. your a great writer and with those kind of emotions you can pull out of anything. so DONT GIVE UP!!!!!!