the words of your poem were extremely well written and the thoughts and emotions it conveyed were marvelous, just work on making it flow with syllable consistancy etc. wonderful job ^-^

Hey Grl thx for da comment on ma bf's poem..he really appreciated it..u noe since its his first time wrting poems and it gave him more confidince..again thx and he wanted to say thx as well...ur poem was really passionit..i loved it a lot...ok well ill talk to u later..peace
*XoX Sw33ti3*

I love this one :D Very nice use of words and language.

Thank you for commenting on my poem :)

Love always
Laura
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AWW HOW SWEET. SUCH A GREAT WRITER U HOLD INSIDE OF U SMILES*
HEY AND THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENT. THEY ALWAYS MEAN A LOT TO ME--AND AS FOR THAT POEM, YEAH I AM OVERWEIGHT BUT HEY I AM WONDERFUL INSIDE SO NO, I DONT CARE WHAT PPL THINK. THANKS AGAIN .LOVES

OMG .. ! I loved this poem .. u did a really awesome job .. lol.. all ur poems seem to have the same heart and passion put into them and i think the talent u have is a gr8 one to have and u do an AWESOME JOB pouring ur feelings onto paper or should I say typin them into the keyboard. which ever. lol .. ! ! ! =D
Also, Thanks for ur comment on my poem, It was gr8 to read and thanks again
Maybeth ! ! =D
Love Ya, and ur Work !

that was really sweet! i loved it. i agree with most of the people here. really beautifully written. that 'special someone' must be really lucky! take care:)

Sedusha, Such a passionate and beautiful piece. Sound like how I feel for my special guy. lol

beautiful poem, keep up the good work. 5's 2 u

Wow!! this was such a cute poem! And it was very passoniate! 5/5