by Unloved ♥
wow thats so sad. I'm sorry you have or had to be treated that way. nice poem |
by ChildofGod87
Wow Heather..:) I can relate to it!! In the past I was over weight:(, but I've learned that guys & everyone just have to see in the inside of a person! (Before I didn't too much believe on that...I would cry & cry...:(Man, it was sad & miserable!! My mom didn't even do anything to make me feel better:( And that was hash, cuz my mom would tell me story when I was skinny and stuff..yeah that helped me to not cry..:(yeah right!) |
by Krete
Hehe. I love it. Excellent job well done! |
by Amanda
Wow, that was amazing. You have a wonderful talent. I don't think anybody is ugly, they're beautiful in their own ways. I would have to say though, that people who cuss, or do bad things make them look even uglier... for some reason. Just because you may look "big" doesn't mean you are, you could just have a different bone structure. Society is made up of people of different sizes, different complexions, different everything. Who is to say one isn't as beautiful as the rest. Because everyone is beautiful |
by N J Thornton
What a great subject. I'm not skinny or over weight either but if i put a few more pounds on i suppose then i would be over weight...i know there are a lot of people out there into appearences and who wont date someone because they are a little bit over weight. I've met so many people like that, but also i know there are also people out there that look at whats inside. My boyfriend loves me for who i am and hes even said if i got really fat he wouldn't care, i'd just be better to cuddle up to hehe. What i'm trying to say is you've hit on a very important subject and you're completely right. I loved your last two lines. It is quiet true, if anyone thinks someones too big for them, their heart must be too small to love. Great job, i'm impressed deffo 5/5! |
by happy days
that was really good and i know that i can relate to it. why odesn't everyone realise that personality is better tean beuty, keep up the good work xxxx |
by Jennifer
I like your poem, never be ashamed of who you are, good job,keep writing. |
by Bizarre
Heather, I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's really good. I can't relate to it though, so I don't really understand what it feels like. But I hope you find a guy who loves you for you. Don't let anyone bring you down. |
by Kia
that's a good poem. i can totally relate, and ya know if they cant tell that im a beautiful person inside cuz they wont take the time to get to know me, the i dont wanna date them. great poem |
by Laura
this is a subject people are really discrete about. i love how you jsut came out and said what you wanted to say. this is really good. i enjoyed reading it...i read it like 10 times in a row. |
by Alexis
Hey, I truly love your poem. I used to be overweight and felt the same way. It's amazing what people will say to you as long as ur not picture perfect. You sound like a beautiful person. Keep Rockin- |
by Matthew Lee
Wow i truely love this poem. With all my heart. I want every guy out there know that they're missing out someone truely beautiful. Hey your friend forever matt. Love yah |
by It Itty
I can totally understand...my 'girlfriends' always tell me that they can't believe that I think I guy wouldn't like me--but that's because they know the real me...they learned to look past the fat and to get to know the person inside. It's hard, knowing that I have to fight for a guy attention, and then continue to fight until either he likes me or I find out what a jerk he is. *sigh* Anyway, wonderful job of putting that feeling into a poem. |
by tragic
amazing heather, i really like this one this is my personal fav now u truly are an awesome poet heater and this is comming str8 from my heart as much as your poem is from yours.... |
by Hidden Sinx
I like to start off by saying your a very talented person, and thank you for commenting on my poems. The other thing I would like to add is .. Any one who judges one person's by the way they look are not only cold hearted but misminded ... Im so sorry people are cruel and rude. If it helps any.. Your beautiful to me. Every Lady Is Beautiful In My Eyes... |
by kyla
great work. this is an awesome poem not only because of the fact that its written nicely, but because so many people can relate. i said it before and ill say it again: TRUE TALENT!=D |
by christina
wow wow wow lolllllll |
by Chelsi
Great job!! Yes, I can relate to this one!! But, you don't let that bother you...I do..You are a strong person!! Keep writin! 5/5 |
Wow, that was very well put. I definatly know where you're comming from. I wish everyone could see others through your eyes. Again, it was beautiful. Great job. |
I really loved this poem... im sure alot of peole can relate to that poem. it probably means alot to them to have someone come out and say how they are feeling, well great job, 5/5 |