really great poem!!!! so true!!! i loved it.
~cort~

Very strong poem!! A great message that is so true! Very insightful and thought provoking~Holly

this is a great poem. very good! i loved it! it was very descriptive and just great! keep it up. take care and stay strong.

it is a well writen and well versed poem. it just seemed that it was more of a free association writing rather then a poem..but it seemed to flow and have rythem to it. i really liked this poem and it seemed to speak not only to me but to the people i might know.

Very Good Job
5/5

thats amazing!!
keep it up!
take care
MeL

Wow. Thanks for ur compliments, brought a huge smile to my face :)