Maybe

by stephanie16   Dec 14, 2004


Hello
is anyone there
if you are where
i feel like I'm falling
to never return
i need help
why cant i stop
i don't understand
why i cant stand
maybe
it was those pills
or maybe I'm just ill
maybe it was those drinks
maybe i should think
maybe i need help
but forgot what helps for
now i cant even sit
please don't have a fit
i cant stand the yelling
thats why my fists are swelling
do you understand
why i cant stand
do you understand
i cant stand its your fault
i just wanna me locked In a vault
so no one can see this part of me
i hate when you watch me
all you do is call me a freak
I'm sorry I'm so weak
I'm sorry I'm a freak

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  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    very interesting, i liked it but some of the lines threw me, the one thing is the line rhymes, be creative with the rhymes (you can look at online rhyming dictionaries for free! yay, totally my fav- just type it in google) and even where you put them. Keep writing, you truly do have talent!
    luv ya!
    kt.

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