Awwww.. I liked your recent poems! Very Lovely and Sweet...especially passionate! I like these kinds of poems:) Keep it up! God Bless and Good Luck!

~!~Angel Loving Sedusha~!~

Great poem very well written!

I definately liked this poem...i think it is not only a great poem but it could be a starting of a song..lol anyways i loved it...5/5
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Scooby

This is a cute poem, hehehe, nice
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CyN

It was okay, not your best work though, the rhyme seemed forced at times, overall not bad, but not the best either. Keep up the good work!