even though is was short,u have portrayed ur emotions very well..Great write....take care and keep smiling....FIVE>>>

the next time you do this, it might lead to my death.....

That's my favorite line. It's true, there isn't always a next time. Don't let anyone treat you bad....You're better than that....Every woman is better than that. Don't mean to preach I just hate to read poems like this. Very good though.

i love it!! 5/5 all the way! good for you.

and i hope your alright :( i know what it's like to be abused too..

take care!! <3 jenny