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by ShadowedPhoenix   Dec 14, 2004


After I spoke to you today I realized that you'd changed
After all those mean things you said
I was suprised I felt nothing Like I was dead
You know what I really don't care
the way you treated me wasn't fair
You keep pulling me close and then pushing me away
I've had enough and I don't feel pain
Thanks to you I'm this way, you are to blame
Because of you I'm numb
But I like it this way, I kinda feel free
I don't cry, I don't hurt but I hate you
For everything you've done
For pretending you loved me like I was someone
But thanks to your recent hatred I can see
That your worthless and that's what I believe!

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  • 20 years ago

    by Heather Clark

    A lot of people can relate to this, i know i can!

  • 20 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    this was a very nice poem...the flow of ur feelings was excellent...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

  • 20 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Excellent poem. I loved how your poem was so emotional. Very good! :)

  • 20 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I thought the poem was good, but I think it could use some punctuation to help the reader along. For example "I was suprised I felt nothing Like I was dead" [I dunno why Like is capitalized]. That sentence should have a period at the end so the reader knows you're compeleting a thought.
    "I don't cry, I don't hurt but I hate you
    For everything you've done" doesn't need punctuation b/c it is not a completed thought, but many of your lines lack punctuation even when they aren't compeleted. Besides that, good poem.

  • 20 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    lol. well, i think all of us can relate to this, even me! i really liked the whole thing especially the flow and rhyme scheme. keep writing. take care:)

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