This is very easy for me to relate to..i like it! *heather

lol. well, i think all of us can relate to this, even me! i really liked the whole thing especially the flow and rhyme scheme. keep writing. take care:)

I thought the poem was good, but I think it could use some punctuation to help the reader along. For example "I was suprised I felt nothing Like I was dead" [I dunno why Like is capitalized]. That sentence should have a period at the end so the reader knows you're compeleting a thought.
"I don't cry, I don't hurt but I hate you
For everything you've done" doesn't need punctuation b/c it is not a completed thought, but many of your lines lack punctuation even when they aren't compeleted. Besides that, good poem.

Excellent poem. I loved how your poem was so emotional. Very good! :)

this was a very nice poem...the flow of ur feelings was excellent...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

A lot of people can relate to this, i know i can!