Notice: I wrote this poem, not from my life, or my point of view, but from a friends point of view. She had read my poems and said that considering she couldn't write poems telling her how she felt, she wanted me to write one for her. So i had her give me her feelings and how she was feeling, and some things that have happened in the past, and i put this poem together. She said it explains how she feels perfectly. I'm not really used to writing poems about OTHER people and how OTHER people feel. But i gave it a shot anyways and things worked out.. well i hope you like it.. here it is...
Oh, and i couldn't think of a good title, so if anyone has any good suggestions then just let me know. And if anyone has any comments please let me know because i want to know what other people think about it!! Because it's something different for me.Anyways....
The feelings inside of me are all bundled up.
The voices in my head will not shut up.
I am sad because i miss you,
because you broke my heart.
I am angry at you too,
for keeping us apart.
But when you do get ahold of me,
like once in a blue moon.
That is not very satisfying,
when you promised I'd be in your arms soon.
You would lie to me,
and always make me cry.
Then try to come back with a plea,
and leave with a long good bye.
Your are my first love-and hopefully the last,
We've spent so many times together,
way back in the past.
The memories are with me forever.
I remember that day,
when you gave me that ring.
I didn't know what to say,
but my heart began to sing.
Every night i sit up in my bed,
Waiting for that little tap.
So many things running through my head,
While staring at your picture, sitting in my lap.
Well, I just want you to know,
that our love is always true.
And from this poem I tried to show,
that i will always love you.
