GAH!! I hate you! Except not really.... But that is a craaazy rhyme schem you managed to use. I mean, seriously. Jeebus man, that's incredible. Blah. No critique on my behalf.
Aken Sol

I doubt I understand what this is supposed to mean...but it makes me feel warm and cozy with all the nice descriptions. *giggles*. No really lol, good job.

That was just beautiful! The images woven within an intricate, mayhap even amazing rhyme scheme make this simple incredible. Awesome job. This needs to be published!

Wow i'm speechless! That was excellent! I loved it:)

Really liked that, amazing work on that

The most interesting and different poem i have read all week! Yay! The rhymes and patterns, um what do you call that... anyways i like the style it was very classy.
-Incognito

i like the stucture very profound

I love this. The imagery is, what can i say, impecible. your symbolism and just the way you worded the text was absolutly lovely. Ireally admired your thorough details that painted an exotic picture in my mind, and your style of how you define each stance is beautiful. Excellent job

i lyk it. even tho it was a lil vague, but u remind me of my frend who writes lyk that.. and thats wats so gud bout it.. its unique.. i lyk ur rhyme scheme..
keep up the talent
nouna
thnx 4 ur comments

Execellent! I really loved this poem! You are a wonderful poet!

I love your choose of words here. Beautiful.

Ace fella.

This is an excellent poem. I love the descriptive words and how you put it all together. Incredible! =)

I liked the rythym alot from this poem. I found it very well written, and I actually think so far this is my favorite one of your's I have read.

I think this is the best poem you've written, out of the one's I've read anyway. It shows your pure talent for writing. Few writers on this site can carry of a poem using enjambment so perfectly. The rhymes seem effortless and the structure is flawless. Not worth anything below a 5. Amazing poem

This was good aswell. It has a somewhat peacefull image. And I noticed the rhyme scheme you used. Very clever! 5/5

`Taleee

Really creative idea with the format. It took me a while to get use to the line set-up, and having a few less syllables in the third line of every stanza. The only thing that threw me off was the first line of the second stanza. Only because it seems more like a concluding sentence for a last stanza. The rest of the poem was good, a joy to read.