y no comments i am shocked. great job simply...i know how u feel to hide yourself from other ppl and tears r the only way to express yourself...wow. beautifully written sweetheart. God bless you. dont do suicide please. u r better than that. dont rid the world on such talent:( well thank you for the comment on my poem "fat girl" it made me smile a lot. loves

Whoever gave me a one is mean, I worked hard on this poem! This is the only poem out of the 41 that I wrote, that actually describes me! And it hurts to know that when I am sharing myself and my feelings with people that I don't even know, that people can be so harsh. This is truly how I feel, and this is dedicated to how people act towards me, leading me to believe that I do not fit in, or I am not beautiful enough. Even though many may call me beautiful I still feel this way, because the ones who are mean to me and hurt me, over rule to a greater extent than those who treat me kindly. And for you to give me the worse grade you could grade a poem, is horrible. You should feel ashamed.

--Amanda

that poem is awesome decribes me... having to hide who i really am, cuz ppl dont understadn great job

dang!!! girl, this poem is very
good. i can tell you when i was
in high school it was just like
what you wrote. your always
trying to fit in, even when you do.
your so young you just started.
the end is scary, it's not the way out
life is what it's all about. ( :
when you pour your heart out like this
in my eyes it's a 5 all the way

great poem...thanks for the comment on mine! :) i cant relate to this cuz i am very open n dont hide eneything (well u kno wat i mean lol) keep writen

hey,this is a good poem!i can relate to it in some ways,but not others!lik i dont blieve in people slef harming!i know they will have reasons but i dont like it at all and think its pointles!but great job xoxoxox