Wow.. I really liked this one. The flow was excellent and the meaning behind your poem was superb. Great job! =)

nice!! :-) great subject and u wrote it so well! :-)
thank you for ure comment on my work!

wow, I must say a very intriguing and excellent way to express your point of view

*I thought this would go under poems about life though?*

I really like how you portrayed your view of the world, and put it into such heart-felt powerful words. They really imapact the reader and give an in depth and emotional understanding to the height of the piece.
I especially admired the line,
"Divided with an unworthy song"
I thought the symbolism of an "unworthy song" was just perfectly used symbolism and in such a beautiful way. I also really admire the stance about religion, just because you wrote it so tragically, yet truthfully, and I really agree with that particular point of view.
Well done

wow...its really really good. its so truthful its just...kinda...i dunno...i cant think of the word...:$
anyway i think its really good.
xx

That was awesome man..Great job..

Later
Chris

wow!!! a most excellent write
the meaning really lets the
readers know what’s up.
5/5 all the way (o:|

that is so true thank you for sharing

wow... amazing! keep up the great work! ur very talented.
Ariane
-xXx-

awesome job! 5/5. >3jess

Gr8 job on this one hun, i loved it , it was so well written, AWESOME WORK AND WAY TO GO .. ! lol .. check out my new works .. lol I miss hearin from ya and I love ya to death ! .. !
May
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