i would expect a poem like that to be longer...but when you can write and have it that short youve got super talent.. nicely done..nicely said keep rockin the poems
-christian hard rocker(iyke)

very good i like it...i like all of your poems! very well said!!!!!lots of love Sabrina

that was a really good poem i like the end the best is that a true story or did you just make it up?