by Georgi
i know how u feel, i have been going thru this too. but as long as u have a best friend like mine u will get thru. great poem xxx |
by Cimara
that was great. it was really touching.i wrote a poem (check it out if you want! its called image) about a close friend of mine who hung himself..i was the one who found him. so this poem connected with me so much it was sad coz it brought back so many memories but also comforting in a way. well done!! xxx |
I just want to thank everyone who commented/voted. Greatly appreciated because i love the feedback. I love to here people who can relate or I like just listening to your stories...This poem is partly true because a friend of my best friend committed suicide earlier this year and it was really tough so this is just to make people aware that things like this really can happen to the people who you care about the most so never take them for granted! |
by Sam
Omg!! this is an awesome poem, i am also going through this and im 13. I'm like crying, it really touched me because a friend of mine hung himself, so i really no how you feel. If you have time check out my poem its called That little girl, and please comment. Keep up the good work! thumbs up 10/10 :D |
by *Elizabeth*
WOW! great poem, but very sad..it had alot of emotion in it, I could feel the emotion! Great work! keep it up! |
by loverforever
this is such a go poem i love it keep righting thes kind of poems |
by -x-Ruthie-x-
Loved this poem alot, so emotional.. I found myself wanting to cry, as i know how she feels. Great poem please keep up the good work, love always. x |
by S
speechless... |
good poem. very sad ... but good |
OMG!! Such a good poem!! I erally really hope this isn't true...i really hope you're okay!! |
I wanted to thank everyone again who are commenting on my poetry. It somewhat comforting knowing that I'm not alone and that people can relate. So thanks! Also to anwser your question Aja, the poem tells you about what happened, then later on goes in to detail how she cut her rist with the razor and then later on went all the way by hanging herself...but yah, thanks for commenting it was much appretiated! |
by brittany
captured what ive wanted to capture in poems |
by Kia
OMG awesome poem great job, |
by Krystal Ross
keep up the good writing, it is very well descripted, hope to read more from you keep in touch |
by melody eyes
I think your poem is the best ive read, keep it up. I give heaps of credit u go girl!! |
by Broken Angel
THis poem is REALLY good great job i love how you can feel it. |
by Knoxy
wow! this is awesome...keep it up! i liked the way u described everything! luv alwayz knoxy..take care |
by Matt
omg ur rite she did copyright it well ur poemz are amazin well dun check out sum ov mine it would mean so much 2 me xxx |
by GREEN EYES
if this is a true story then Im really sorry that you friend commit suicide!!! |
by Wallace
A very sad poem, i enjoyed it, i always believed that sad poems were the best and you reminded me that. |