i thought that was good... keep it up!

its not rly very....well....u no wot i mean. good tho x

your missing the point of my poem leave me bruised and scarred means tear it up evrything i say theres a meaning behind you jus have to be very open minded to get it and thanks sedusha at least i think you may have gotten the point to my poem its about hot sweaty sex with no limits

I see what you're trying to say... kinda...but still...
Gurdy x

I get it gurl! It was mad hott!! Keep it up i liiked it!!

yes it was good. well done, i can see you have put true feelings into it. keep it up! luv ya, lucy x