i liked it...keep it up. MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!

alwayz,
*autumn*

Merry Christmas to you too!

Wow... that painted a beautiful picture! I love the language you use in your poems! I hope you find what it is you're looking for, and try to have a Merry Christmas (cliche... I know)

~Ciao Lipton

Such a beautiful poem. You have a beautiful way with words. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! lol

Very nice, I hope you get what you are looking for. Merry Christmas.

there is so much heart warming imagery in this piece,
"Joyful and Triumphant
The carols sing their tune
As a breaking, simple silence
Shows the figure of the moon"
- i love that stance. I could see the picture and feeling of christmas and the warmth all around me.
I also liked that once you got the reader into a relaxed and pleasent state of mind you took a turn w.the sadness and emotions you seemed to have forgotten at christmas time. i absolutly love the last stance,
"I am at the mercy of your blessings
At your feet to ask for strength
To make it through this holiday
With trusted, needed Faith."
It could have no more perfect or beautiful, wonderful ending.

Amazing poem as always... um... MERRY CHRISTMAS