Hey Cimara, u told me to check your poem out so i did. and seriosuly it's awesome. it's sad and truly is touching...it makes you think twice, never take anyone for granted cuz u don't know how long they will be arounf for. i'm really sorry about everything if this did happen, overall well written. keep up the good work!

ay u checked my poem and said it was good and asked me to look at ur ... hell ur poem was real good i give it a 5. keep on writtin cuz ur real talented

thank you for the comment!! truly a great poem but i only hope it is not true...God bless you sweetheart, ur poem is beautiful...loves.

Wow that was amazing! It was also very sad and broght tears to my eyes. Keep writing all your poems are wonderful! I gave it a 5!

I didn't think there were many people out there who understand exactly how i feel....i know where you're coming from.....it never goes away.....i love your writing and i appreciate you reading mine....that really moved me.....Thanks again
Kalika

i love the last line the most! lv A, x

wow. your uncle huh? i feel your pain in a way. you have a scare of your life with your uncle. and i have the scare of my life by almost getting raped twice and my dad almost beating me. life is a boozer. this poem was very deep. i got the shivers. weeirrrrd.

wow, my friend found his father hangin from inside his home...and he will never be the same too! Great poem!

So beautiful !

xxx