Sleepwalking

by Lushed   Dec 17, 2004


Chaos in a blackened room,
My life death wants to take,
Too bad theres no going back,
Please don't let me break.

Sleepwalking through the rest of my life.
No longer Innocent
Choke on the smothering heat
Of all this hate and regret

I'm begging you to find me
begging you to see
But until that day
I think of heaven
and watch my blood drip down.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    wow, awesome poem, the first stanza especially; it's soo descriptive, great work!!!! =) thanks for reviewing
    -Erica

  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    Hey...I really like this! Who the crap would give it a four...fools. They never read the piece twice.

    I really like the way how you simplify the walk of life, as simply 'sleep' walking. Poetry is the best way to vent, and lament.

    Good job! 5/5

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