that was really good, thanks for the comment!

OH THATS BRILL N ALL, soz caps. People hoide thigs like this. you capture it very well.

I like the the structure of your rhymes... my favorite stanza was the one about "my eyes... crystal blue" ... the language in those lines are particulary lovely... still, great work :)

wow, that was truly a great poem one really worthy of the max 5!!! lol, but seriously amazing one.....kick a**!

i loved this poem, it was great!! so emotional but using few words!

amazing!! i no exactly how u feel. beautiful poem.
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