by lisa marie Dec 17, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Here we go again, the same old effing story |
by Chad
Wondrerful!!! |
wow i really loved the concept of it...wow wow wow. haha good job keep it up!!!! |
by SCARECROW
Not bad. Not brilliant, but not bad either. All in all, it was pretty good. |
by ?
It's a great poem and all except hang on, why are you writing a depressing poem lisa marie? I thought that no one is depressed? why don't YOU shut up with the sad poems, instead of telling others to. |
THE LINES ARE VERY EVEN NICE RHYME SCEEME DESCRIPTIVE |