Excellent poem, very, very, imaginative. I wish I had that ability. Take care and keep writing.

Thats Amazing. I can't think of anything else to say. Its so well writte.. Well done!

niice. you used some awesome words. haha, i sound like a two year old. but thanks for your comments! you rock. seriously a unique and original piece her. congrats, 5/5.

I agree - you have talent!! Keep on writing!