This is the ever falling rain

by polly   Dec 17, 2004


Its raining
this is the rain

i lied

its my tears
this is my heart and mind
in pieces
as are my eyes
closed in diamonds of sadness

my tears

my ever falling rain
behind this skin

my ocean

my waters of weariness
shuddered in the waves of nervousness
ripples of destruction i feel.

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  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    great poem!! very well written!! keep it coming!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤

    The last part is definatly the best on this one. Great job, a very nice peice. 5/5. keep it up. I'm sorry to say this is the lat one I can read, please wrote more! just ask and i'll read them! ^_^ you are a great poet. Never quit!

    -Cheerfully Cynical-

  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    i really like this poem it was very well written keep up the good work!

  • 19 years ago

    by polly

    thankyou for that very useful comment sweetie, God bless
    polly

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