thankyou for that very useful comment sweetie, God bless
polly

i really like this poem it was very well written keep up the good work!

The last part is definatly the best on this one. Great job, a very nice peice. 5/5. keep it up. I'm sorry to say this is the lat one I can read, please wrote more! just ask and i'll read them! ^_^ you are a great poet. Never quit!

-Cheerfully Cynical-

great poem!! very well written!! keep it coming!! :)