Hi! Mansi. Nice poem, shows dedication for your love. Keep iit up, I'd like to see more of your work.

heeey...! i liked the poem alot! i like the idea too cuz its sorta different than alot of other love poems...GOOd JOb!
*~~`SoNjA`~~*

Wow this is extremly beautiful. You should write more hun. You have a gift. keep it up. Shanik