I need his affectionate touch, to maintain my breath
And his every word, to keep my spirit bright

Don’t spoil my bliss to further extent
Just keep him here in my presence

those two stanza's really seemed to jump out at me when i read the poem. it was well thought out and it seems that it was definately encouraged by something in your real life..everything works out for the best...but sometimes the best is the worst at the time.

Hey Merrily this is an awsome poem. I mean wow. And im your friend how come u neva mention me:( lol. il call u tonight

That was pretty good..keep it up cuz u got lots of talent...latez
*XoX Sw33ti3*

Merrily me and mom got into a fight, and now my pants moved to michigan. call me for info, you probably think im crazy
ashley

excellent poem!!!