i thought that when people first read this so many different thoughts will go through their head trying to figure out what its about. this poem could have so many different endings and i think your writing style fit this poem the best. keep rockin the poems
-iyke

Wo, that was AWESOME. Not that long, not that short, but SO FRICKIN AWESOME! I liked the way you described the emotions: Shame, embarrassment, anxiety of having to break the news. It kept me reading, waiting to find what it was about. Loved the way u ended it! Hey thanx 4 the comment on my song! I appreci8 it LOADS!!!!! Type ya l8r, Fighter. Take Care, So Much Luv, and Peace! //ari\\ aka $!L3n+ @++!+ud3

brilliant poem, i agree with iyke, wasn't sure what it was about til the end. great effect! 5/5

love mark xxx