Hey this is good. It reminds me of myself a lot. Everyday i put on a mask to hide from others of what i really feel within. I hate having pity, so i put on fake smile and fake personality. Just so others can put up with me. I you really were to see me for me. You would see a tired person with a weakening spirit and a damaged heart.

this is gd it really jus reminds me a lot of myself my parents only found out las week that i felt how i felt wen they saw my cuts and scars until then i did always hav to hide behind a mask. xxxxxx

ummm... wow

Wow!! What an amazing poem! The first few lines were very well written and got me hooked right away and made me keeped reading, which is really neat!:o) Keep this up! And thanks soo much for the comment:o)!
Shannon
P.S.I am adding u to my favorites so please do keep writting so I can check out more of ur work!!

great poem. just love it. keep it up.

check out my poems some times. means alot to me.
thanks
xoxoxox
nida
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