by Mild insomnia Dec 18, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I run like I’m racing a bullet, |
by Bonnie Rose
All i can say is...wow, i clicked and the first two lines caught me, this is jst amazing writing |
by Aysha
great poem.. luv ur style of writing! |
by pinkalias
I liked the symbolism of a forest and the detailed descriptions of the chase passing through it. I also admire the dark imageries you use throughout the piece. I especially admire the lines, |
Great poem! I'm not very good at deciphering symboli, but I will take a wild guess and say that the forest represents a group of people and the tree's are being more specifiv towards individuals? Let me know if i am even close to being right. Prolly not but owell. Great poem thought! Keep it up |
and then a third, ta jem... |