great poem em

em you know this is a great poem lol

oops i forgot i commented well you have it twice now lol.

and then a third, ta jem...

Great poem! I'm not very good at deciphering symboli, but I will take a wild guess and say that the forest represents a group of people and the tree's are being more specifiv towards individuals? Let me know if i am even close to being right. Prolly not but owell. Great poem thought! Keep it up

I liked the symbolism of a forest and the detailed descriptions of the chase passing through it. I also admire the dark imageries you use throughout the piece. I especially admire the lines,
"Broken branches and fiery foliage,
Greet me as I gracefully fall.
Slicing through my skin, they dig in,"
I like the detailed imagery of the speaker's pain and sufferage. Good job

great poem.. luv ur style of writing!

All i can say is...wow, i clicked and the first two lines caught me, this is jst amazing writing