It's a great poem! I've been writing since I was 13 (I'm 16 now) and there's no such thing as a work in progress. The words you put on a page at first are the real things, not the edited mask. I think your poem is perfect the way it is. Don't change any of it! And keep up the great writing!

Even though it's a work in progress, I love it.
'Look me in the eyes, then tell me I’m not trying,
By putting on this smile, I hide my teary crying' They're my favourite lines.