Comments : The One That I Love or The One That I Use

  • 19 years ago

    by CinnamonTwirl

    OMG! this poem is amazing. I can completely relate to it, except for the being married part, i really like the line
    "What should I do, who should I choose,
    The one that I love or the one that I use?" and I want to write a poem around it, maybe later.

    Anyways, if you could read my poem "now that were apart" or any of my poems and comment i would really appreciate it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    Thank you so much for your comments!! It really means alot. Thanks again!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful poem. I love all the lines in this one. A great poem. lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    Thanks again for the comments.