Hmm...This is an interesting poem. Its a little confusing, but I still like it. I like how your poems have a wide range of interpretation.

What I mean, is that when you narate its a wonder of who your writing/speaking to. I like the style. Keep it up & Merry Christmas. 5/5

Kumar, Another beautiful poem. No one is worth not wanting to live. Always remember that. When it's meant for you to find that special girl, you'll know it, and things will be wonderful. There's always more fish in the sea, as the old saying goes. Sometimes a lot better the second time around. Take care my friend. Merry Xmas and A Happy New Year! lol~~~Ann~~~

omg thats so sad...and as always brilliantly written!!
i hope evreything works out fine..take care always
~~5~~
MeL

get out of it dear!!!! would like to see you end ur poems on a happy note... keep smiling!!!

This peom is awesome, It has such strong emotion, and powerful words to really get thru to ppls heads, once again AWESOME WORK .. ! And Thanks for ur lastest comments ..
Love Ya ,
Take Care Sweetie ,
Maybeth !

Awwww... I loved this poem Kumar! God Bless your heart, Sweet and Touchin poem:) Always keep on writing!
*5/5* Sedusha!

heyy that was juussstt awesome i dont understand how in this world can u ever think of all this!! but dont go to kill urself..she is definitely not worth u if she leaves u mid way u will get someone grt!! i know u will

ouch thts sad!
u wrote it beautifully as always! :-)

LOVED IT..! YOU'RE A STAR!...*

:MUCH LOVE 4 YOU-_- FROM ME!

CyN