by In_Your_Eyes Dec 18, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
You asked me tonight to tell you true |
by Robert
sounds like something Peter Parker would say to M.J. in the next spiderman film. Intresting that was a good read keep up the work... |
by Ria
I like the idea of using the title in the end, makes it powerful and emotional.Ireally liked your poem,it confused me a bit, but it was nice! |
by Dawn Manna
that was really good. i liked the rhyming and the use of odd words. it was a little confusing...is it true? why can you reveal how you feel? well the poem rocks and please keep writing |
by ASPHYXIATED
this was a good poem the lines like others said need to be leghtened....but all in all it was a good poem and emotional....x) |
Beautiful poem. I love it. I gave it a five. Keep it up. |