by Emilia
wow, great poem you've written =) |
by katie!
Well done, I enjoyed it, check out mine if you get the chance, I dunno whete=her ive commented on this before |
by Brookeღ
Very well put u did an exellent job on this poem. If u would check out some of mine Thanx! |
by Emilia
This is a great one.. I voted a 5.. |
by katie!
wow that was amazing well done |
by hussain
that part when poeple arnt there for u ..that i can relate to most of the poem...but dont hate urself if people treat u like dirt thats their porblem not urs ...rise above it |
by Ericka
It's A Good Poem. Great Job At Expressing Your Feeling. 5/5 Ericka |
by L0KA
Hey I liked ur poem a lot! I feel da same way sometimes. Ur a good writer. I look forward to reading more of ur poems. Nice job. 5/5 =) |
by *Sherrie*
This is really good...i may never get there |
by Emilia
wow what a great poem... very good job =) 5 for this one... Please check out my poems "You cheated in a cheap hotel" and "the silver moon sparkling" thanks, hugs |
Wow, that's just how I feel, so I know what you are going through!!! It's a very good poem, keep up the good work.....It deserves a big 5... |
by Dorotea©
This poem definitly had some good stuff in it, liked the way it was written too! Keep on writing, take care. |
by Selfrejected
kick ass...poem most people have summed it up already...so...4/5 |
this si really nice its the a poem i tried to write called mirrrors mayb u can check it out? take care and well done xx |
Great poem hun. A lot of emotion. I know how you feel. I feel the same way at time. Great job, keep it up! |
by Emilia
wow very good... very well-written.. I voted a 5 for this one! please check out my poems "eternal sunshine of the spotless mind" and "My dad: dead and gone forever" thanks a lot.. ((please vote and comment)) |
This was really great. You really did a great job there. The poem was well written and it flows very well. And it is very sad =( Still Great Work!!! 5/5 =) |
by David Paul
Wow. good poem. It sucks if thats how you really feel but over all its a really good poem. there were a couple words in there that don't really belong (shit). Good job though. Never give up. |
I think that this is a good piece but I worry if it is auto biographical that you would feel like you can run away from being yourself. I hope that instead of running you can look at yourself and see a person who shows a tremendous amount of potential in her writing and if that comes from your inside then your inside is beautiful. Just a word from a concerned stranger. Take care xx |
by AJ
thats sad but really good, keep it up |