Comments : False cry

  • 20 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Great poem m'love...I hope you didn't do what you wrote in your 5th verse...Very emotional and powerful write doll. Hope you are alright...love you ...<33 xxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 20 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    dont worry, its not the action, its the emotion

  • 20 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    awesome poem, this part:

    Thank those of you who have listened
    To my rant of false ambitions
    I’m safe tonight from past tears glistened
    And now continue on your missions

    excellent, wow! great work! 5/5 definitely

  • 20 years ago

    by Georgi

    awww this is rly good poem. keep up the good work!