A Crumbled Petal From A Yellow Rose

by Heather M Craig   Dec 19, 2004


It has been months since you gave me that yellow rose
but I kept a single yellow petal from it that day,
As it gets older it crumbles and wilts even more,
and our friendship is the exact same way.
I hold onto our friendship tightly and it crumbles
and even when I do nothing with it, it will still fade.
You can do everything for it but nothing ever helps
even when a solid foundation is laid.
I look at that crumbled petal from that yellow rose
and memories seem to form and I start to cry...
I remember us laughing, I remember us in tears,
I remember us hugging, I remember us fighting,
I remember your smile and I remember your eyes
but most of all I remember how you hurt me and was always lying.
I love you with every inch of that heart of mine
but why you hurt me like you did, I will never know
but I will never forgive what you caused me
that is why I hold on to the crumbled petal from a yellow rose,
That is all I have left of us besides the memories of the past
but I watch it fade away as each day grows more and more
but you in my heart won’t fade like this petal does
and that is a promise from the bottom of my heart, I am sure.

*this is dedicated to my ex best friend Amber Kempfer, also on this site~if you wanna know why she is my ex best friend, you should read the poem Heartbroken but yes, i am sorry this is not as good as i expected it to be but what is behind it is much more important than the poem itself. I hope you all leave me comments and votes, i try to return the favor...loves.*

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  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    aw, im almost in tears!! that was so meaningful, it makes me think, that, that could happen to me in a few year or months time, as i am already slowly drifting apart form my best friend!!! xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    thank you everyone...i feel so great to finally have another poem in high remarks, i havent in a while so this explains my happiness!!! love ya all very much...thank you so much again!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    Wow! this is really great! I love it truely I do! that is so sad how that can happen . . . I've had that happen before. . . but I try to look away from what happend between me and my old friend. . . keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

    p.s. yes of course you can use my poem! trust me ur not the only person to ask if they can use one of my poems. . . one woman from the U.K asked if she could use my poem Slice the Soul for a book she was writing, and of course I let her do it as long as she said that I had writtin it! so please do use my poem! I'm happy that others can read it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Guilty By Design

    hey it's me taht girl you registered lol well i just wanted to thank yuo so thanxz o yea good poem

    -sheyla

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    Aww, I loved this poem Its so cute.. you did an excellent job with it ! The beginning it my fav part but the whoel thign was GR8!!! lol ! But neways , If you get the cahcne I'd love your feedback and comments If you'd like to give them, lol, Thanks and Good Job !
    - Maybeth =D