Do you see?

by Lushed   Dec 19, 2004


Do you see me hanging?
My frail body sick and weak?
Do you see me dying?
From your words so oblique?

I am wrapped in torment.
Blood dripping from my frame.
Do you see my weak eyes drooping?
Numbing all my pain?

I refuse.
Never again will i lie.
Never again will i fake a smile.
Never again will you turn a blind eye.

Look at me hanging.
Look at me alone.
Look at me and see,
what you have always known.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    awesome poem, the repetition in the third and fourth stanza is especially useful to make your poem more meaningful, great work! 5/5 definitely!

  • 19 years ago

    by Incognito

    Wow that poem shook me deeply, i absolutely adored it (tho it was a bit dark) keep writing, this is the first of yours i have read but not the last. :)
    *Incognito*

  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    I dont know who gave this anything lower than a 5, but I must say this poem is particularily awesome.

    I love the statement it makes. The weakness in conviction of another, and in the self, or the physical aspect of one.

    Truly a grabbing poem. Excellent! 5/5

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