I dont know who gave this anything lower than a 5, but I must say this poem is particularily awesome.

I love the statement it makes. The weakness in conviction of another, and in the self, or the physical aspect of one.

Truly a grabbing poem. Excellent! 5/5

Wow that poem shook me deeply, i absolutely adored it (tho it was a bit dark) keep writing, this is the first of yours i have read but not the last. :)
*Incognito*

awesome poem, the repetition in the third and fourth stanza is especially useful to make your poem more meaningful, great work! 5/5 definitely!