Please Fulfil...

by deadnalone   Dec 19, 2004


This is for my angels, broken or not. I actually got the idea for this poem from thundersrose (read, never be gone to far) hope you don't mind if you're reading this.

I have prayed so many times,
For the pain inside my heart to stop,
But this time I pray not for myself,
But for my angels that I love such a lot,
I don’t want them to feel the pain,
Like I have felt before,
Please take all the hurt they feel,
Even if you have to give me more,
Please let the happy, cheerful smiles,
Be more than just a mask,
Let them be real as they once were,
Please let them forget the after math,
I ask you please to take their wings,
They once were so light and soft,
Please take them into your loving hands,
Make them able to fly, to float aloft,
Brush the dirt off when they fall,
Let them no longer cry,
Let the only tears they shed,
Be not tears of blood or crimson joy,
Let them become what they once were,
Make them happy and glow within,
I ask you please to take their sorrow,
Please take away their scars of sin,
When they fall and stumble,
Please guide them with your hand,
Let them know I love them so,
That they don’t need to leave this land,
Please god; give Lucy back her halo,
And fix her golden heart,
She’s tried to leave her hurt behind,
Please god; show her where to start,
I ask you to take from Lisa,
All her hurt’s and pains,
Please will you stop her worries?
And bring her smile back once again,
I ask you god to give me,
A chance to set things right,
To show my friends I love them,
Please stop their final fight,
Jo, she needs your help too,
To dye her blackened wings,
Please fix the broken bones in them,
And let her soul again sing,
Tom, I love him so much,
Please will you let him see?
Just how much he’s helped me,
Show him how he set me free,
Take the other angels that helped me,
Take their tears and pain,
And collect them in your hands,
And let them fall as rain,
Then let the sky be sunny,
And let everyone be free,
Please show them that they need no masks,
Show them how happy they can be,
Let nobody hurt them,
So they no longer need to cry,
Take away all sorrows,
And every tear from every eye,
I ask you one final thing,
That you could please do for me,
I no you have no reason to,
But it would make me happy,
Please watch over my loving angels,
Please watch them day and night,
Because they are the ones I care about,
I love them, for them I’d fight,
So god; please take my prayer,
Have mercy if you will,
Because I need this final wish,
For them, please fulfill.

Thank you thundersrose for inspiring me

*all votes and comments greatly appreciated as always*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    gr8 poem!! luuuuved it..keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by jescelle

    oh sweety i prey for you everyday, and it seems to be working :)

  • 20 years ago

    by Toni

    Amazing! It was so selfless and so full of love!! I'm truly staggered at how much u care about them! Wish i had friends like that!! xxxxxxxxx

  • 20 years ago

    by confusion

    hun, i duna wot 2 say. thank u. thank u. thank u. lol. its gorgeous. luv ya hun, neva 4get dat. soz if ive been quiet l8ly, just thinkin an stuf. always wil b ere, lu -x-x-x-x-

    ps, neva eat dusty chocolate ;)

  • 20 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Great write...relaly touching...ThundersRose is a great writer...an amazing inspiration...Really well written doll. <3 ...You're a great friend to your friends

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx