What is she doing

by ♥broken fairytales♥   Dec 19, 2004


What is she doing
Sat in her dark room all alone
What is she doing
With a knife in her hand
What is she doing
with a some vodka in the other
What is she doing
When she takes a huge swig
What is she doing
When she cuts deep into her arm
What is she doing
As she watches the blood drip
What is she doing
As the room begins to spin
What is she doing
As she feels sleepier and sleepier
What is she doing
When she shuts her eyes one last time
What is she doing
When she takes her last breath
What is she doing
She's dreaming her favourite dream
and hoping it'll come true

This is about a girl called katie who i used to be really good mates with but we've drifted apart now.

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  • 19 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    hey its pretty good i just didnt get alot of emotion but its all good maybe just your style i guess peace out yo keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    that's a cool poem i like it. great job

  • 19 years ago

    by my blue eyes cry

    Hey that was great, i could feel the tention build up as i read on.
    You have a very creative way of drawing your reader in. Its like your painting a picture.

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    this is freakin awsum ....i love it . keep up the great work. one of your best.
    xoxo sherrie

  • 19 years ago

    by Marina

    WOW that is like so good! I mean it ur so good at this!!!

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