I Thought

by the love of another fills my soul   Dec 19, 2004


I thought we were best friends,
but then u wanted 2 make it more.
So we went out,
we had a good time.
Life was just grand 2 u .
But certainly not mine.
I want my best friend back. But no one seems 2 care.
So i ask u this
what was it that i liked about u so much?
I thought we'd be toghther forever
just u and me.
I learned a lot from all of this,
or so i thought.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Ho hum, I think you could make this longer, but maybe it would take some of the sparkle away if you did.

    we had a good time.
    Life was just grand 2 u .
    But certainly not mine

    I liked this part, very effective. Cool poem x

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