A Soldier’s Elegy

by Ð맆îñ¥   Dec 19, 2004


I can’t see a thing.
The darkness devours me.
It smothers me.
I’m clad in black.

The light has left me,
Abandoned me.
I’m forsaken.
I’m empty.

To light a candle,
The purest light.
My hope renewed
I return to the fight.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Short but full of meaning...awesome.. very well done....keep it up

  • 20 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    awesome poem, i love the first stanza, and the second... and the third, right... excellent poem! 5/5

  • 20 years ago

    by miss scooby

    I liked the words you used it flowed really well, and had a really strong message...great poem definately worth a read 1 million times...
    take care
    Scoobs

  • 20 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Beautiful rhyming poem. Simple, yet meaningful. Your style reminds me of one of my friends' :) it's well written.

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