thats such a great poem!!
i loved it!
i can relate to it as well!
keep it up!!
MeL

hey . . .I Love that song . . . lol . . . and i like all your other poems too . . . they're good . . . keep up the good work . . . thanks for commenting on my poems cuz it's people like you who inspire me to write . . thnx . . .

Now that had feeling in it and it was great
5/5 I loved it, it’s longer, and the sentence structure was better and I could relate and understand the meaning of it.
Seriously loved it!!!!!

that's a song honey

hey this is a song by BRANDY...u should at least put the song t=name under it ay...oh well

peace
-angel-