Hey..this is just amazing..I love how you have written this...flows really well..Its just so beautifully written..Luv it! Continue to write okay..you have talent!! Two thumbs up!!
Shannon

hi Haley, another nice write about a sad topic, but you handle it well, and let the reader know that you may be down, but by the good gosh sake your not out,that you will survive, and love anew, another place another time, another love is all that you need to fasce the world with dignity,grace, strength,hapiness,tranquility, and rest assured you will find it harry

You have so much talent. A very beautiful poem that captivates you with the flow. Great job! Enjoyed! lol

Thank you Harry once more for your kind words and encouragement!!!

Kind regards
Hayley

Nice job on a rough topic. Although the overall flow worked well for the piece, there were spots that were more choppy. However, I am a stickler for rythm and uniformity in a poem. Again, nicely done.

- Brad

Wow! Superb.

Great poem, good diction, could feel the emotion coming through it. xmollyxx

Another great poem it showed such true feeling I love reading ur poems. U have alot of talent!

I like the way that you express the mood and set the tone. I usually don't directly address anything in my poems because I fancy the English Rennisanse style. Keep up the good work.

nice flow

Stone by stone, I'll rebuild my life...

I love this line...No doubt in my mind
you will...you are so talented....

Shelby

Very touching...good use of words and discription. you've got talent! yippe! xoxLISSAxox

Great poem i loved it!!!

WOW am shocked that such a great poem didn 't get the vote it deserves .it's written beautifully and skilfully. i love ure style .it's special

keep it up

Hey nice work