Hey Emma!!! Thanks for commenting on my poems, it really helps, more than you know!!! I liked this poem because I can really relate to it!!! You see im a diabetic (if you know what that is) and its really hard to deal with it, and no one understands me!!! Sometimes I feel like running away or like you said at times you just feel the need to kill your self!!! It's very hard but i have a special friend whos helping me through and also people like you who write poems that help me get through my day and help me realise that I am not alone!!! Thank you it means the world!!! thanks for commenting!!! Luv ya gurl

I gave you a 5, because it is really good. I think you just need to sort out your sentence structure and make sure everything flows together and makes sense. At the beginning I could understand and I got into it, but the last line kind of takes the seriousness away for some reason
still a really good poem though
well done

really sad and touching poem.
Never lose your hope Emma.
much love,
marjan